Evening Jog

[BKSPicture]

Technical info
Camera: Pentax Spotmatic SP II
Lens: Meyer-Optik Görlitz Orestor 135mm f/2.8
Film: Rollei RPX 100
Scanner: Plustek OpticFilm 7600i
Place: Uddevalla / Sweden

 

[LaFoto]

I feel like the intended subject of your photo (the runner that gives your picture its title here) is too small and blending too much into the background to really be a good subject. Had you waited for him to be running through the shadow of one of the birches in front of him, with his white T-shirt shining against that shadow, it might have been better. Only would he then be in the very centre of your image (given the chosen framing), which would not have been too good, either... Dilemma.

 

[BKSPicture]

I feel like the intended subject of your photo (the runner that gives your picture its title here) is too small and blending too much into the background to really be a good subject. Had you waited for him to be running through the shadow of one of the birches in front of him, with his white T-shirt shining against that shadow, it might have been better. Only would he then be in the very centre of your image (given the chosen framing), which would not have been too good, either... Dilemma.

Choosed this framing and where the jogger are becouse the little trail over the person which points at him and my eyes goes directly to the person even if he is quite small in the shot.
I ussaly don't name my pictures and the name is just for the forum post.
The name was just the first thing that poped up.

Really appreciad you taking your time to write what you thing about the image, constructive criticism are the best