Fallen Star

[johendley]

The Jet Star Coaster, star trail from last night.

Startrails Over The Jet Star by johendley, on Flickr

 

[pgriz]

Well, that is pretty dramatic. The only niggle for me would be the location of the rollercoaster. It would have been just a little bit better if you were able to move to the right, so that the rollercoaster was not overlapped by the planks in the foreground. Other than that, well shot.

 

[timor]

Yes, it is pretty overwhelming, too many interesting subjects which are each for itself. It's hard to say what is the leading motif. Sometimes less is more.

 

[jenko]

I really like the idea of this image.

Have to agree, though, that there is a bit too much going on. I really just want to see that roller coaster in the water.

You did a nice job on the B&W conversion.

 

[Compaq]

I think timor is onto something, here. If you could shoot with a longer focal lens, and keeping only the rollercoaster and the star trails in the shot, I think it would be stronger. KISS, it's said.