Feedback on the indoor portrait picture

[wet]

I have my main lighting on the left of my models (my friends), fill light slightly off to my right. I was wondering if the picture is too dark or what should I do differently to make it better? Again, thanks in advance for all the contructive advise.

 

[Misfitlimp]

post an example please

 

[ocular]

It's a bit odd that you wouldn't check you thread to make sure pics are showing.

 

[wet]

Sorry, I checked after I posted it, it was working then.
If my picture doesn't show up again on the post, here is the link: Indoor portrait on Flickr - Photo Sharing!

 

[snaggle]

Thw light seems a little strong from the lest side, and the crop is too tight for my liking.