[Feedbacks] First photos, please give feedback!

[Auriflanos]

Hi, today my pentax arrived and of course, 44 new photos on my hard drive!

But, here are some that I liked most, and I would like to recieve feedback, so I can learn more!

PS: I am more newbie than a newbie!

Photo 1: American Flag with congratz from my friends:

Photo 2:Springler:

Photo 3:Yellow flower

Photo 4:Lamp

 

[minister]

IMO 1 and 2 are good composition but, all are out of focus. try to keep pictures in focus and keep your hand still

 

[Bone Puddle]

I cant see the pictures

 

[Bad Andy]

Congratulations on the new camera. I think that #1 could be a good shot, and the composition on #3 is good. All of them are out of focus, it looks like the camera is focussing in the middle of the frame. A common early mistake is not selecting the correct AutoFocus point in your camera. Be sure to pick the dot that you want to focus on. #1 and #2 could benefit from a little deeper depth of field, (stop down to a smaller aperture).

Keep shooting and posting, and most importantly have fun.

-Andy

 

[Cfitz]

Number 3 and 4 are slightly underexposed but I'm not sure if that was you or the camera. Also like the others have said check your photos after especially zooming in on your screen to see if focus is right. As always practice makes perfect so keep shooting and good luck!

 

[pamelica]

I like the composition of Yellow flower

 

[Auriflanos]

Thank you for the feedbacks. I will try to take carefull with the focus

The Lamp photo is underexposed... I did not turned any light on the room, so...

The flower is too way close, so I need to find a good distance...

About the flag, The problem was to keep mu hand still

But, thank you all for the feedback!