I looked at it full-sized...looks good.The edge of the sleeve where it peeks around the shoulder is a tiny bit distracting, but I LIKE the sharp, clear, fairly real-looking skin and face detail...I dislike obvious retouching, and rpoefer to see the minor little skin pores, the teeth, the eyelashes, all that stuff: I LIKE seeing un-retouhced portraits that look like REAL people have always looked...not a big fan of a lot of smoothing and warping and retouching and so on ...
Pretty good for a first go with the new Softlighter! I've been using a similar umbrella box going on ten years now, and reallty like the quality of the light that the double-diffusion gives! For those not familiar with it, the Photek Softlighter is a modifier that Annie Liebovitz of RollingStone magazine has used on many,many shoots over the past decade or so.