First Maternity Shoot - C&C please

[LindsayMastro]

Hi there, This is my first thread... Here are some shots from my first Maternity Shoot. Let me know what you think!

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[fjrabon]

2,3,5 are pretty underexposed. Should've made the guy take his huge white plastic watch off. There are smudges on the background in 5. There isn't a single part of 3 that is actually in focus.

The guys nails are better manicured than the females. NTTIAWWT