First Seascape and first lightroom attempt

[Osbornezo]

Hi all,

Here is one of my first seascapes. Still have a lot to learn. Non level horizon annoys me. Had a go in lightroom and here is the result. Feel free to critique my shot and editing

Before: imgur: the simple image sharer
After: imgur: the simple image sharer

Thanks!

 

[fokker]

Your edit is an improvement, I think you could do more though. Is the original in RAW?

Here's a protip for levelling your horizon in lightroom: When you have the crop dialog open, hold the ctrl key (this is windows, not sure the mac equivalent) and you can draw a line on the picture that lightroom uses to level it. So draw the line across your horizon and boom, quick and accurate level horizon. Also works on verticals.

 

[Braineack]

looks too underexposed now. You probably need to combine 3 exposures here: sky, water, rocks.