flying rat

[bribrius]

View attachment 72274

 

[manaheim]

Looks like you missed.

 

[Mike Lamb]

Crop out the right half and you have something.

 

[bribrius]

Looks like you missed.

yeah, and no. i have photos of flying seagulls. I liked this one though.

Crop out the right half and you have something.

View attachment 72281maybe. not sure. i kind of liked the negative space. Think it looks better?

 

[manaheim]

Yup, new crop is much better.

Not sure it's great, but it has something, as Mike said.

 

[Designer]

i kind of liked the negative space. Think it looks better?

Negative space helps some compositions, but not all. Yes, this is much better.

 

[Dagwood56]

The crop works much better. That could have been a great motion shot if you'd gotten the entire bird.