What's new

Fun at the park!

Alistair

TPF Noob!
Joined
Nov 21, 2010
Messages
97
Reaction score
3
Location
Las Cruces, NM
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
First one:



Second one:



This one just a little bit of fun in PP.

Third one:



No PP, just straight to export.

C&C If ya like!
 
I really like the first one, I think if it was maybe rotated horizontal and maybe cropped a little closer it could add something to it though. I did it on my cpu and like it alot if you don't mind I will post it.
 
Be my guest!

I think it looks really good horizontal.
new.jpg
 
First one is cool...
 
Compositions look good!

#1: Need more contrast to me - too many similar shades and not enough 'stands out'.
#2: Like the duck - great sharpness of the duck features - would suggest trying to shoot with a little different lighting. I would like to see more lighting on the side of the duck that we are looking at in the picture
#3: I feel like the focus was a bit missed here because my eyes aren't able to find a place to focus on and I keep roaming around the picture to find the focal point.

Hope my opinions help!! Keep shooting!
 
First and second are my favs. :)
 
Karri,

Thank you for the comments! Let's see if this improves #1 one a little bit better:



Uploaded with ImageShack.us

As for #2, now whole lot I can do about that one. I don't have any form of good lighting yet, and that's in the mail. =) I think the on board would have been way to harsh for what I was doing there. Plus, I thought I would have a little bit of PP and see what kind of fun I could have. Hehe.

Originally:



#3, oh, well. Hehe. Not whole lot I could do there, PP, unless someone has an idea.

Everyone else,

Thanks for the comments so far!
 

Create an account or login to comment

You must be a member in order to leave a comment

Create account

Create an account on our community. It's easy!

Log in

Already have an account? Log in here.

Back
Top Bottom