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JustJessie

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These are some pictures I took of my boyfriend and his niece. We had a blast! C&C Please! :)

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C&C per request: (Although in the future, I'd say it's too many photographs for most to give specific C&C)

1. Looks like a snapshot. There's no really interesting angle, the subjects are cut off and the background is really competing for competition.
2. My favorite of the set. She looks happy, the DOF is interesting. Only nit picks are that her head's cut off and her hands lookd dry.
3. Again, it looks like a snapshot. Not a bad thing, it's just not what I would call a portrait.
4. Same as #3.
5. Better, with the DOF, she looks washed out. Pop up flash maybe? Also the chairs in the background also compete for attention, IMO.
6. It's interesting. I can't really place why, but maybe it's the way everything seems to be straight, sort of until you start looking at vertical lines and then nothing seems straight.
7. Again, a snapshot. It looks like focus might have fallen on her shirt or just in front of her eyes. In other words her eyes appear kind of soft.

Over all, not bad for a set of photographs to keep for a treasured family keepsake. :)
 

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