girl in bikini on a beach

[Trever1t]

_POR8208-Edit by Bill Grayson, on Flickr

 

[ClickAddict]

Might suggest getting rid of the few pale stray hairs. Otherwise nice shot!

 

[Trever1t]

Might suggest getting rid of the few pale stray hairs. Otherwise nice shot!

I cleaned all the hairs off her face and that was work enough. It's windy at the beach

 

[JacaRanda]

Might suggest getting rid of the few pale stray hairs. Otherwise nice shot!

I cleaned all the hairs off her face and that was work enough. It's windy at the beach

I just had some experience with stray hairs and wind too. WHAT A PITA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[ClickAddict]

The ones in front of the darker rock are the ones that stick out a bit. Not a big deal though. I still like the photo,

 

[manaheim]

Loverly.

 

[FITBMX]

Very nice, great eye contact!
Just wondering, do you ever do photo shoots with men, or is that out of your area?

 

[Trever1t]

Very nice, great eye contact!
Just wondering, do you ever do photo shoots with men, or is that out of your area?

I do when contracted, I shoot anything the client desires within limitations but the glamour is my hobby and only women.

 

[JoeW]

1. Lovely model--truly lovely.
2. I agree about the stray hairs on the rock. Otherwise, I love the windblown effect and thing all the others should stay. In fact, next time, have her use one hand to pull her hair back in to place (a hand behind her head/neck as if she's pulling all of her hair in to place and on to one side)...a nice pose technique for an inexperienced model (something for her to do with a hand), convey's the windiness of the area but also helps keep the hair under control.
3. I'd suggest all her hair on one side and a more relaxed pose (she appears "nervous" in the pose rather than casual or relaxed or natural).
4. Also, it's a very small thing for me but...when shooting, I think it looks better if the top matches the bottom (rather than two different pieces from different suits).

 

[Rick50]

Very nice Trev...

 

[FITBMX]

I do when contracted, I shoot anything the client desires within limitations but the glamour is my hobby and only women.

Cool!

 

[DarkShadow]

Very Nice and I love the hair flying around it's pretty obvious it was windy looking at the OOF back ground as you can see the choppy waves.

 

[Trever1t]

1. Lovely model--truly lovely.
2. I agree about the stray hairs on the rock. Otherwise, I love the windblown effect and thing all the others should stay. In fact, next time, have her use one hand to pull her hair back in to place (a hand behind her head/neck as if she's pulling all of her hair in to place and on to one side)...a nice pose technique for an inexperienced model (something for her to do with a hand), convey's the windiness of the area but also helps keep the hair under control.
3. I'd suggest all her hair on one side and a more relaxed pose (she appears "nervous" in the pose rather than casual or relaxed or natural).
4. Also, it's a very small thing for me but...when shooting, I think it looks better if the top matches the bottom (rather than two different pieces from different suits).

I gotta say I cringe when I see you post 'cause I know you're gonna nail the critique. Thanks (everyone) for taking the time, it does help and I do take it and try to improve with every edit.

 

[JoeW]

You're too kind. Please keep on posting b/c I love your work, your models. My biggest complaint about your work is: we don't see enough of it!