Girl on the bridge

mentos_007 · Apr 13, 2005

I like the contrast here but because you posted it in critique thread, I'll critique it a bit

those two guys in the background are a bit ditracting

and I'd lower the angle a bit, because it is annoying that I don't see the bottom part of the bridge. I think that by lowering the angle you'd loose the empty space in the top-right corner. but it's only my humble opinion

KevinR · Apr 13, 2005

I agree that contrast is good and getting the people out of the shot would help the image. I also think it should be a little darker.

Corry · Apr 13, 2005

mentos_007 said:
I like the contrast here but because you posted it in critique thread, I'll critique it a bit those two guys in the background are a bit ditracting and I'd lower the angle a bit, because it is annoying that I don't see the bottom part of the bridge. I think that by lowering the angle you'd loose the empty space in the top-right corner. but it's only my humble opinion

That's a pretty good critique, in my opinion. The other people in the shot really do detract...without them, you could have conveyed a sense of lonliness or thoughtfulness, I think as well. The sky that day didn't make your job easy, either...I hate shooting on days like that.