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[bfphoto]

I love the concept, but feel like it maybe should have been shot at a higher aperture... I would like to see a little more clarity in the face of the girl... Other than that love the light!

 

[cguron]

The picture does not convey the theme. It is possible to improve the picture in technical sense so that you are able to provide a desired effect, but it does not establish the connection with the theme.

 

[mozzie71]

Id probably crop out a lot of the blackness on the left... maybe bump the colours up a tad Nice shot though!

 

[photolodico]

My immediate thought was the sense of freedom was in the ability to dream. I used to stare at my globe when I was little and dream about where I would travel when I grew up. The ultimate freedom is in the mind. I love this concept regardless of my interpretation being right or not, very clever. My Prof used to say once you release your image to be viewed by the world you no longer have any say about what it is, so stick to your guns and don't worry about how others interpret it.

Also, yeah, I agree with the higher aperture comment. Please show us your final results!

 

[Psytrox]

I think this is a good photograph for the theme: Freedom. I've always liked to travel, and the freedom to travel, as of the latest century this has greatly increased.
I'm glad you didnt chose a cheesey obvious photograph like a flying bird, or dove, freedom bird, statue of liberty, or some war monument representing freedom. In these cases its so obvious that the viewer doesnt really get a chance to use their own imagination. With your photograph it gives everyone a chance to have their own interperatation of the photograph.