Thanks for the comments.
IMO it needed the long lead in lines to create a feel of foreboding, it is an old church and to me was reminiscent of the "Hammer House of Horror" genre of movie, the pp was done to echo that. For me, the slightly ajar door also added to the effect.
@Deeky - The small white square top left of the door, is a spotlight, and in hindsight I should have got ride of it.
The camera height was about 300mm (smallest my tripod will go, but I could have set the camera on a beanbag on the ground, point noted - thanks.