Good Bad or Downright Ugly?

[Trever1t]

Shot her laying down, facing me. I've flipped the image, replaced her lips because her mouth looked wrong, some select and warp hair, skin work. Done more as an exercise and I'm purposely pushing the boundaries of my abilities, I'm undecided if it's a keeper or practice and toss only.


_POR1644-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

 

[Tiller]

Her mouth still doesn't look right to me. Maybe bc of the teeth.

 

[Nevermore1]

Her mouth still doesn't look right to me. Maybe bc of the teeth.

What he said. Also the border/edges of her mouth don't look natural, it actually looks like they were added on.

 

[Trever1t]

no, actually that's real and how they look. I think the upper lip isn't sized right.

 

[Nevermore1]

no, actually that's real and how they look. I think the upper lip isn't sized right.

The center part of the upper doesn't look very defined to me (I am not on my regular computer though so it may be my screen). To me it looks like it was blended a little too much or something. I'm having trouble figuring out how to explain it...

 

[Trever1t]

Yes, I think that's right. Darnit!

 

[Derrel]

Oh, I know today is your birthday, so I'll tell you that, "You look good, Bill. You are NOT ugly--no matter what the guys at work tell you!" ;-)