Haylee - Class of 2014

twocolor · Apr 28, 2014

Pushing through all my 2014 seniors!

1.

2. Not sure if I LOVE this one...

3.

4.

D-B-J · Apr 28, 2014

Nice set! The issue with the second is you cut too close on the bottom. It seems "top-heavy," if that makes sense.

Cheers!
Jake

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Rosy · May 2, 2014

twocolor said:
Pushing through all my 2014 seniors!

1.

2. Not sure if I LOVE this one...

3.

4.

#1 is my favotite

twocolor · May 2, 2014

Rosy said:
twocolor said:

Pushing through all my 2014 seniors!

1.

2. Not sure if I LOVE this one...

3.

4.

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#1 is my favotite

Thank you!

JacaRanda · May 2, 2014

#1 is my favorite also.

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EOV · May 2, 2014

JacaRanda said:
#1 is my favorite also.

Yep, me too. Quite the dimple there.

Steve5D · May 3, 2014

The only issue I have with #1 is that you don't see her eyes. I think that detracts from the shot...

twocolor · May 3, 2014

Steve5D said:
The only issue I have with #1 is that you don't see her eyes. I think that detracts from the shot...

I've got same pose but her looking up at me... not nearly the same effect. I love the feel of a moment captured on this one. I did give them one of each shot though.

twocolor · May 3, 2014

Steve5D · May 3, 2014

There ya' go; very nice!

To clarify, I don't think the other one was a bad photo at all. Quite the contrary. However, I don't think it makes for a good senior portrait...

twocolor · May 3, 2014

Steve5D said:
There ya' go; very nice!

To clarify, I don't think the other one was a bad photo at all. Quite the contrary. However, I don't think it makes for a good senior portrait...

I agree, the first one isn't your traditional senior portrait, but today's seniors don't want the same senior portraits their parents had. BUT, mom does still pay the photographer, so I make sure and get poses that mom would want on the wall as well as ones the senior would be proud to show off at school!

DewanDemmer · May 7, 2014

#1 I like this one most of the set, in this case I do not feel a need for eye contact.
#2 For me this might work a little better if the angle changed to be over he a little more
#3 This shot is missing a little something ... for me I keep thinking the chair should be at a 33-45 degree angle ... as it is it feels somewhat isolated to me
#4 Here I would love eye contact, I really think this one could have impact with eye contact

twocolor · May 7, 2014

DewanDemmer said:
#1 I like this one most of the set, in this case I do not feel a need for eye contact.
#2 For me this might work a little better if the angle changed to be over he a little more
#3 This shot is missing a little something ... for me I keep thinking the chair should be at a 33-45 degree angle ... as it is it feels somewhat isolated to me
#4 Here I would love eye contact, I really think this one could have impact with eye contact

Good critique, thank you... except #4 she is staring right down the barrel of the lens...

ronlane · May 7, 2014

Nice set of images. I agree that #1 is my favorite. I actually like them all. I do have three things that are really nitpicky but do not take away from the set. 1) I agree that #2 could use a little more foreground (grass to even things up a bit. 2) I would like to have seen her shoes off in this one in the chair.3) in #4, I would like to have the hair moved a little bit to see her other eye.