Honest CC please.

[Stevepwns]

Im trying to step up my camera game. Well, my processing game as well. Been going different directions with my "artistic" side. Please, take a peek and if there is anything maybe I would have done, composition or processing wise, let me know.


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Untitled by JEaston | Photography, on Flickr

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JEPhoto-05558 by JEaston | Photography, on Flickr

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JEPhoto-2 by JEaston | Photography, on Flickr

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JEPhoto-02269 by JEaston | Photography, on Flickr

 

[Designer]

#1 Why not color? Pose and frame good, light good.
#2 Sugaring needs a person in the shot stirring.
#3 Strange, but good. Perhaps better light on the other side?
#4 Still trying to like it.

 

[Stevepwns]

#1 Why not color? Pose and frame good, light good.
#2 Sugaring needs a person in the shot stirring.
#3 Strange, but good. Perhaps better light on the other side?
#4 Still trying to like it.

1. Ill post the color version for you to look a it when I get home. I just liked the B&W version... no real reasons.
2. thank you
3. Had I had the foresight I would used some fill flash, but you know the whole thing about hindsight....
4. Anything you dont like about it?

 

[Designer]

4. Anything you dont like about it?

Just harsh. I realize that is your intention, but it is jarring nevertheless.

 

[Stevepwns]

4. Anything you dont like about it?

Just harsh. I realize that is your intention, but it is jarring nevertheless.

Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate your comments

 

[mmaria]

Hey! keeping my promise

#1 she's beautiful and all but the picture just doesn't have any effect on me
#2 I like the place and every other photograph you took at this place... maybe a bit overdone
#3 I like everything about it except the time of the day. strong shadow and hallowing. See now when I mentioned hallowing, around the statue?
#4 oversaturated for my taste. I like it the best but with different editing


when you're editing and you think you're done, step away, forget that you edited and come back after some time, with fresh eyes. You tend to overdone it in pp

done!

 

[astroNikon]

# 1 nice but strong sun, and strong shadows. But don't cut of her lower right arm/elbow

# 2 I've gotten stuck doing stuff like this and I've been told that I have too many "objects" in the photo that are in focus. THe true object is the simmering sugar *in* the pot, but that's in the pot, thus the reason if a interesting looking person was stirring the pot then that person would be the strong interest object in the photo. But, considering I take pictures of fog for no reason I also like the steam coming up. Matter of fact, on the right hand side I can see an outline of a person in the steam .. okay ... no paranormal here .. just an observance
So I like it, but then i take pictures of trees too .. so take my C&C with a grain of salt.... or an ounce of maple syrup.

# 3 I like it, though I wish the light was a bit better diffused/consistent under and around the object. I like the background sky & sun. So I really like this too even with the background building distortion. can't do much about what I said until you bring reflectors / flash at that time of day.

# 4 - It took me a long time to figure out what it was. a wilted rose. I was going to post before anyone else did but I couldn;t figure out what # 4 was so I held back until now. I literally thought it was a green bean on the left and someone else on the right. lol I think it goes back to my fog problem lol

 

[Stevepwns]

Hey! keeping my promise

#1 she's beautiful and all but the picture just doesn't have any effect on me
#2 I like the place and every other photograph you took at this place... maybe a bit overdone
#3 I like everything about it except the time of the day. strong shadow and hallowing. See now when I mentioned hallowing, around the statue?
#4 oversaturated for my taste. I like it the best but with different editing


when you're editing and you think you're done, step away, forget that you edited and come back after some time, with fresh eyes. You tend to overdone it in pp

done!

Thank you for taking your time, I will take your advise. I appreciate your your compliments and criticism.

 

[Stevepwns]

# 1 nice but strong sun, and strong shadows. But don't cut of her lower right arm/elbow

# 2 I've gotten stuck doing stuff like this and I've been told that I have too many "objects" in the photo that are in focus. THe true object is the simmering sugar *in* the pot, but that's in the pot, thus the reason if a interesting looking person was stirring the pot then that person would be the strong interest object in the photo. But, considering I take pictures of fog for no reason I also like the steam coming up. Matter of fact, on the right hand side I can see an outline of a person in the steam .. okay ... no paranormal here .. just an observance
So I like it, but then i take pictures of trees too .. so take my C&C with a grain of salt.... or an ounce of maple syrup.

# 3 I like it, though I wish the light was a bit better diffused/consistent under and around the object. I like the background sky & sun. So I really like this too even with the background building distortion. can't do much about what I said until you bring reflectors / flash at that time of day.

# 4 - It took me a long time to figure out what it was. a wilted rose. I was going to post before anyone else did but I couldn;t figure out what # 4 was so I held back until now. I literally thought it was a green bean on the left and someone else on the right. lol I think it goes back to my fog problem lol

Thank you for the input. All input is considered. I take nothing with a grain of salt and everything is considered. Again, thank you for taking your time to give me some feedback, I appreciate it.