I, Concrete

[Mike Lamb]

I like them both but wonder if the face is too gimicky. CC please.

 

[Designer]

For my taste, I wish you hadn't added a human iris. #1 would be just that much better.

 

[sscarmack]

Second one is cool. But I agree with @Designer here. Iris ruins it imo

 

[Scatterbrained]

I think number two would be improved if we had the rest of it's "mouth" at the bottom. Just sayin. For some reason it kinda reminds me of FryLock.

 

[Murray Bloom]

I agree. The eye(s) don't work for me. I'd have liked them better as simply a study in concrete.

 

[Robin Usagani]

That looks like a manhole for a pipe.

 

[MOREGONE]

I totally like it. The 2nd was unexpected and pretty cool.

Lot of feedback on the eye which, to each their own. But it could be possible to gel a speedlight and point it away from the camera to illuminate the inside leaving a black dot ( the backside of the speedlight) to look like an eye. Just a thought.

 

[feg94]

I think the photos are interesting enough without the eyes.

 

[Mike Lamb]

Damn. I liked them eyeballs.
Thanks so much for your comments. We'll be working on it.

 

[mishele]

Love it!!! The splash of blue makes it!!

 

[annamaria]

I love it just the way it is.