I'm Dying for a Critique!

[gw2424]

Any other takers?

 

[Frequency]

I saw only this image of yours...and i find it is excellent; but as a forum member i hold it is improper that you post only the link and take members there than displaying them here; all are posting their images here- the erudites and the beginners; so kindly do that
Regards

 

[Frequency]

Don't die for criticism; live long for that; you deserve that

 

[jwbryson1]

A nine-inch softbox is still quite,quite small.

That's what she said...

 

[Light Guru]

Your selective color sandwich just does not work.

Selective color as a whole seldom works and selective color where the selective coloring is gradual like you have it never work well.

 

[SamiJoSchwirtz]

You know honestly when I read the first sentence I was a bit hesitant. You're 14 and that good, I cannot imagine how good you'll be when you age.
Great photos. Not much to critique they basically said it all for me.

 

[gw2424]

I will post a version before the selective color, there were distracting plates in the back.

 

[gw2424]

Feel free to edit!

 

[gw2424]

"I saw only this image of yours...and i find it is excellent"


That is one of my favorites!