Just a simple shot!

[tiohasegawa]

 

[Frequency]

@1: the bulky trunk that swallows 3/4th of the frame is problematic here; the eyes leads to the palm leaves which are out of focus too; your experimentation is appreciated and it is such experimentations that sometimes bring out wonderful results; so please continue....

@2: If they were facing one another, composition would have been better

@3: Petals are a bit over exposed; better keep flower to one side; you can even trim out some surrounding area too

Regards

 

[tiohasegawa]

Thanks Frequency..
I will fix them in my blog!