I like the first one. Second one doesn't do much for me.
On picture one: I think the pole could have been an added part the photograph had it not cut through the car and the street light. Because it cuts through these things, I find it a little distracting. had you moved over a few steps to get that pole to line up with the street light pole, it may have added a seperation feel to the photo. I'm not really sure though. Also, if you really wanted to, you might be able to remove the pole with PS if you took the time...but that may take a few good long hours. Over all (i guess without the pole), the shot is a great capture and really like the feel of it.