Like a dial-up connection.................

[Steve56]

..........I'm slowly getting there.

I took these photos of a water fountain whilst on holiday. I can't make my mind up about them because I'm either expecting too much of myself or being hyper-critical.

I took 7 in total but I don't want to overload the thread with basically the same shot.

What do you think?

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[jmtonkin]

I think the composition could use some work...If you hadn't have told us that you that was a fountain, I never would have known. I know what you were trying to achieve but my suggestion would be to zoom out a little bit and use the RoT.

 

[Steve56]

I think the composition could use some work...If you hadn't have told us that you that was a fountain, I never would have known. I know what you were trying to achieve but my suggestion would be to zoom out a little bit and use the RoT.

Thanks. Looking at it from your point of view I can understand that the composition could be better. I reckon I was too focused on capturing the individual water droplets and neglected the composition of the overall shot.

These maybe better but with the same effect.

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