I agree with the others about the horizon. The other thing that I'm not too thrilled about is that the person gets lost into the background. Maybe if you'd kick in a little light from the left of the frame, it would define them better. Great concept and otherwise well executed.
I dont know why i cant never shoot strait.. I can easily fix this in photoshop but any tips about shooting strait?? i will fix this and repost on here. and yes Shey.. we have to go shoot again.. I have that gig at my x-mas party today (18 Dec) if you wanna tag along with your fancy camera it would be nice.. I can slide you a few bucks too but anyways.. hit me up today if u want, so we can plan our next shoot. hopefully this weekend.