Looking for CC on 2 photos

[sunlou]

Hey,

Just looking for CC on there 2 pictures... lighting composition Post process colors... thanks



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[ecnal]

I'm not a pro or anything, but I like #2 better. The composition, etc. I would have liked to see her body straight up and down with head cocked.

Also, if there was a well-defined trail of smoke coming out of the mouth I think that would make it better, instead of just having a haze above her.