Very good, couple of things tho, mostly agreeing with what others have said, i'd have sloped the shoulder slightly more so as to get a more natural lead into the pic, the purple and yellow don't bother me too much, but i'd either increase the amount of the purple flower we can see in the shot or take it out all together, it's too little right on the edge of frame. The earing should go as it's unecessary, and i'd quite like to see more definition in the right eyelash, as it is it kind of blends into the background too much. All of these are minor things tho, you've certainly got the major things like lighting nailed