"Marooned..."

[enezdez14 5]

X Pro-2
f/1.4
ISO 1000
1/125Sec.
Fujifilm XF 16mm f/1.4 R WR
16 mm Equivalent 24 mm
(Processed In LR & Pro Colour Efex Pro 4)

Thanks For Looking Any Comments/Criticism Will Be Appreciated.

Cheers,

Enezdez

 

[Rahb]

I’m no pro, but I like the use of negative space Since it’s low keyed. The fence(?) that caught the light in the background, and the curb are a tad distracting. Looks like the iso brought in some noise or it just wasn’t quite sharp enough.

 

[smoke665]

I like the direction you were going. The use of negative space black or white can create some dramatic images. As the above I might be inclined to clone out the background distractions. Or I might take out the curb and leave the fence. Regardless it's still a good shot.

 

[enezdez14 5]

I’m no pro, but I like the use of negative space Since it’s low keyed. The fence(?) that caught the light in the background, and the curb are a tad distracting. Looks like the iso brought in some noise or it just wasn’t quite sharp enough.

I like the direction you were going. The use of negative space black or white can create some dramatic images. As the above I might be inclined to clone out the background distractions. Or I might take out the curb and leave the fence. Regardless it's still a good shot.

I agree with you both; however, I leaving the shot as is...it was sorta of a therapeutic for me...

I needed to release some steam...so I drove to this place at 10:30 pm & took a few shots...

I going to post another shot from the same place of which I really like and came out well....and it was fun too!

Cheers,

Enezdez

 

[Jeff1549 49]

Nice idea............