Mitchel - A Senior Session

[Wendy Mayo]

CC welcome.

 

[D-B-J]

the background totally kills the first one, although, the others are sweet.

 

[ghache]

The 3rd one is pretty damn nice. The only thing i would do is level it with the bricks lines. Seems like its on the side a little bit

 

[DC-Photog]

2 - looks great. I might crop out the left side where you see trees and grass.

3 - Killer image. I don't know if I'd want the mortar lines straightened or more angled. I'd try it both ways and see what works best.

4 - Nice light and pose, but the bag isn't working for me. I don't like his foot cut off, but that's not such a big deal. My rule with props and seniors: if you can't wear it or hold it, we don't use it. Unless it's a car.

 

[kundalini]

#1 - This shot really works for HIM. Everthing else though, is another story.

#2 - Very senior sorta shot. I just wish the ceiling brace and vertical joint didn't hit him. A slight move on both of ya'lls part would have eliminated this.

#3 - If you could keep him in his position and then straighten the wall, oh yeah. I like the shot as is, but only if the song list was typed in the empty space. Actually, I do like the negative space, but this is also a good candidate for a portrait orientation.

#4 - Don't cha hate it when you chop off a foot? Nice colors and processing with one exception. I think a bit less vignette is called for.

 

[Wendy Mayo]

Thanks everybody! I so appreciate the time you take to give me feedback. There are things I have forgotten, and other things I never thought of before!

On #3, I sometimes like to graffiti the kid's name on the wall, but this one I liked just the way it was, negative space and all.

And yes, I hate it when I cut off fingers and toes! ARGH!