Model shoot, critique please...Thanks :o)

[ukreal1]

edited on picnik, I cannot get my mind around ps...
from a photoshoot at a 'haunted' hotel here in Oki...
Link Here
couldn't get image to post, sorry...

 

[Hannahbelle]

Love the photos of the kids, the ones of the little girl are fabulous.

 

[JonathanBlu]

These are some very fun shots, i realy enjoyed the shots of the kids.

 

[ukreal1]

Thanks! That's my daughter, she get's annoyed with me sometimes, taking so many photos!

 

[skieur]

Raffia 2 edit is overexposed on the far side of her face and the background which makes it a poor choice for a beginning shot on a web site.

Reducing the exposure and using a reflector on the camera side would provide a much more evenly lit photo.

skieur

 

[ukreal1]

I see that now, although I still like it ). Might see if I can play with the exposure a bit when I get in the mood!
anyone else? I have some other model shots taken the same day as well on my pbase site, thanks