Models and Bracelets - Maybe NWS -

[dmccarty10]

Some outtakes from a recent shoot.

 

[Luminosity]

There's something about her pose in the first photo, maybe its the way she's leaning, that looks uncomfortable. The second one would work wonderfully in the b&w. She is still leaning in it, but having her face angled in the opposite direction and nestled under her arm helps in balancing the shot. I do, however, like the warm tones in the color version.

I didnt find it distracting to the shot but I noticed the underarm hair in the first shot and wondered if you did too? Also wondering if she unconciously sticks her pointer finger out during these poses out of habit. Did she do that in other shots? I attended a shoot the other week where the model did the same thing, out of habit. We had to keep reminding her to tame it lol.

 

[Christie Photo]

Some outtakes from a recent shoot.

So, where are the "keepers?"

Pete

 

[markc]

I agree with Lumi about the uncomfortable looking pose and pointing fingers. I prefer the second one, but would like to see the framing a little lower so that her other elbow is in frame.