Morning after (C&C)

[DashingStudios]

Hi!

I'm brand new to the forum and only got into photography about a month ago. Looking to gain a lot of experience on here so all comments and criticism are welcome!

1. We can't know where the model is looking. Is this bad?

2. I should fix the exposure on the face, but I love the sunny morning effect.

3. Her arm is cropped out. Is this bad?

 

[lili15]

Wow beautiful!!!!!

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

Wow beautiful!!!!!

The photos are nice too....

 

[Geaux]

Love the ideas of 1 and 3, and 2 would have been nice if the bright light across her eyes weren't there. I'm sure if she moved a step or two to the left, you wouldn't have had that issue.

If that is your house, I'm hella jealous, love your styling!

 

[Opher]

Love them all but you are right about number two... the shadow is distracting

 

[Derrel]

Could you work in a third iteration of Dashing Studios, perhaps?

 

[lyonsroar]

#1 is the best

#3 is the worst. Looks flat to me.

 

[aprock83]

1. i like the fact you cant see what she is looking at, very mysterious.
2. agree with the exposure on the face.
3. very unique point of view, a very good picture.
I like all these shots.

 

[Corvphotography]

i like all these shots. The 2nd is my fav. The light on her face isnt bad. Gives me that feeling like, she is dreading the morning and the light is too bright. OR the light give this determined look on her face like she is ready to "suck today's dick" ha ha

 

[RockstarPhotography]

nice work for only being in photography for a month. #1 is a great shot. for #2 you might want to try to rig up a diffuser on the window and hide it with the curtains to tame the harsh light. On #3 I would like to see more model and less wall. great job though

 

[DashingStudios]

One thing I noticed, especially on #3, is that the colors are rich in raw and once I save to jpg it turns a bit dull. Any way to fix that???

 

[thatfornoobs]

A little color correction would go a lone way for these photos. Maybe try using the rule of thirds as well.