Muse on a Hotel Suite Sofa

[Tropicalmemories]

Continuing our 'Tour of Thailand' - and this time our budget stretched to a suite .... more space and less wildlife than the last budget hotel.

I do have a version with her feet, but preferred this one - but not sure if I should clone out the phone charging wire?

 

[CherylL]

I like the black/white with the lines of the sofa. The phone cable is not intrusive.

 

[Tropicalmemories]

I like the black/white with the lines of the sofa. The phone cable is not intrusive.

Thank you Cheryl! And I guess phone cables are a standard accessory now.

 

[Derrel]

Cable is fine. Like the shot.

 

[K9Kirk]

The cable blends with the curves of the couch so no biggie. Nice shot.

 

[Space Face]

Another pleasant smile. I'd have preferred it without the cable but it's subjective.

 

[gk fotografie]

Continuing our 'Tour of Thailand' - and this time our budget stretched to a suite .... more space and less wildlife than the last budget hotel.

I do have a version with her feet, but preferred this one - but not sure if I should clone out the phone charging wire?

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Yes, crop, crop, crop, the furniture at the bottom is quite disturbing, the enormous empty space above the head does not contribute anything to the composition. The horizontal, elongated sofa works well in this photo. The right side of the photo and legs of the model could be slightly darker in my opinion. It's a nice picture.

 

[Tropicalmemories]

Continuing our 'Tour of Thailand' - and this time our budget stretched to a suite .... more space and less wildlife than the last budget hotel.

I do have a version with her feet, but preferred this one - but not sure if I should clone out the phone charging wire?

View attachment 195806

Yes, crop, crop, crop, the furniture at the bottom is quite disturbing, the enormous empty space above the head does not contribute anything to the composition. The horizontal, elongated sofa works well in this photo. The right side of the photo and legs of the model could be slightly darker in my opinion. It's a nice picture.

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Yes - I like the tighter crop.

I also looked again to see if I had a shot without cut off feet - and there's this one, although there's the blown out highlights from the strong sunlight on her legs.

I cut down the blank space at the top too.

Her slippers make the area behind her feet look a bit confused, but it was a quick shot as she relaxed in the hotel room. Not sure my editing skills are up to removing the slippers though.

 

[Tropicalmemories]

..... and the original with further edits based on the feedback .....

 

[gk fotografie]

..... and the original with further edits based on the feedback .....

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The last edit is really a big progress, but one small thing really bothers me, it's a matter of aligning and a bit of cloning in the 4 corner parts.

 

[Tropicalmemories]

..... and the original with further edits based on the feedback .....

View attachment 195864

The last edit is really a big progress, but one small thing really bothers me, it's a matter of aligning and a bit of cloning in the 4 corner parts.

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More like this further edit .... ?

 

[gk fotografie]

..... and the original with further edits based on the feedback .....

View attachment 195864

The last edit is really a big progress, but one small thing really bothers me, it's a matter of aligning and a bit of cloning in the 4 corner parts.

View attachment 195954

More like this further edit .... ?

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Yes, I myself would make the sofa on the left side and the legs and skirt of the model a bit darker, because in the white fabric there is now too little detail to be seen, while it is present. I think it has become a better photo because of the crop, nice work.