My latest attempt

[scotts2014se]

Trying to follow advice concerning over processing...

 

[vipgraphx]

HHmm Im not sure this does anything for me. Im not to crazy about the top being cropped off and the left side, there is nothing interesting there. Processing is not to bad just depends on what your are going for. Little ghosting in the clouds.

 

[AndyjO]

I noticed the ghosting too but I don't think the scene is too bad

 

[Designer]

At least you didn't over-straighten it.