My lunch and its children

[jamagica]

A bit overexposed, but hey..it's abstract...

a crop job for the first:

 

[jamagica]

if this thread is void of responses because of these photo's suckiness, please state so

 

[jamagica]

or if it's void of responses because I'm complaining that it's void of responses, please state so

 

[Threesia]

Don't feel bad, I've had a post up for days now with no replies. As for your photos I'm not sure what I think. Maybe they would have been better shot from a different angle. Of the bunch I like #2 the best. Together they make me want to clean up the mess. haha

 

[03civicdx]

I think you just made everyone hungry for a PB and J

 

[Jeffro]

it's abstract!!! you are correct...

I really dont get anything out of them. Cool Thought but try something else!

Angles, zoom out or in even more... less light? I dont know but try something

 

[Josh66]

if this thread is void of responses because of these photo's suckiness, please state so

Some people find it rather insulting when others associate their shallow thinking with the quality of the photo.

or if it's void of responses because I'm complaining that it's void of responses, please state so

If that was the case, trust me - someone would have said so.

...Sometimes you just have to give it some time, and maybe a bump.

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I like your crop of the first one. There's just something about that blob of jelly (that you cropped out) that I just didn't like...

I don't noramlly like selective coloring (there are very few cases where I think it works...), but I think I like your's. I'm glad that you didn't go crazy with the saturation on the colored portion - I think that's what kills most selective color images.

 

[jamagica]

I wish I had a macro hahaha..I tried to make that "line" or pattern evident (really evident in the last one), but I think the foreground and background are so close to each other that everything still seems cluttered. Thank you all for answer my immature call of desperation. Too bad I already cleaned the plate hahaha.

 

[jamagica]

if this thread is void of responses because of these photo's suckiness, please state so

Some people find it rather insulting when others associate their shallow thinking with the quality of the photo.

or if it's void of responses because I'm complaining that it's void of responses, please state so

If that was the case, trust me - someone would have said so.

...Sometimes you just have to give it some time, and maybe a bump.

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I like your crop of the first one. There's just something about that blob of jelly (that you cropped out) that I just didn't like...

I don't noramlly like selective coloring (there are very few cases where I think it works...), but I think I like your's. I'm glad that you didn't go crazy with the saturation on the colored portion - I think that's what kills most selective color images.

I apologize for the way I responded to your other response (the paper towel one)...it was 2 in the morning and I felt like poking at someone because I know that they can't do anything about it..anyways...thanks for your response

 

[Josh66]

It's OK. I've done it too...lol.

I was probably a little too short with you too.

 

[jamagica]

lol! Another shot up there

 

[Josh66]

WB seems off on the latest one... The plate has a slight greenish cast.
(Ignore if that was intentional)

 

[jamagica]

indeed the green cast was intentional..is the WB too much or too little? I'm seeing too little

 

[jamagica]

or perhaps overexposed?

 

[Josh66]

I don't think it's really a case of 'too much or too little', it just not 'white'.
It's not off enough that it really messes up the photo (which, depending on the photo, might not be so messed up - sometimes there is no "right" WB), it's just a little. Just enough that it looks like it could be accidental, but maybe not.

edit

exposure looks fine.