Nancy - Lingerie (so if your boss don't approve....nsfw!)

Trever1t · May 18, 2015

your thoughts?

_POR1962-Edit by Bill Grayson, on Flickr

_POR1942-Edit by Bill Grayson, on Flickr

JoeW · May 18, 2015

Lovely work and thanks for sharing.

First pose, I think would work better if you got lower. That's b/c you'd get more of the white backlit blind behind more of her body. Also, b/c she's short, that tends to make her look heavier. If she was less straight on to the camera...maybe hips at an angle twisting at the waist so from the waist on up she was facing us...that would flatter her a little better.

Second pose--her face is lovely. Frankly though, if her right arm is further back (so we could see the curve of her back) she'd look thinner....by having her bicep hide her back you add 2 pounds to her. Also, the small gap between the garter belt and her thong/panty is a bit distracting (and not distracting in a sexy way) so I'd remove that small line of flesh. I find the handles/object on top of the box on the shelf to be a bit distracting...if you can remove those that makes for a nicer background.

Excellent choice in lingerie--goes very well with the model. Given her hair color and the lingerie, I think I'd have pushed for a stronger red--more contrast with the hair and lingerie, more of a match with the fingernails.

All in all, it's lovely stuff.

Parker219 · May 18, 2015

I REALLY like the first photo. The look she is giving is perfect. Almost like..."Are you going to join me"? :eyebrows:

Too bad about the reflection on the glass doors, nothing you could do about that though.

The colors and contrast look spot on to me!

For the second photo...something weird is going on with her butt. It looks like its a different color and even texture? If I had to guess, I would say you had to fix some things in post production, and you lost some color / detail.

I'm not a big fan of the pose, just because she is in lingerie, and being in lingerie...what should she do? Read a book?

Since she has to be close to the background with that pose, the background items can be distracting, in my opinion anyway.

The biggest issue is her right arm....as you get close to her bra strap on her shoulder, her skin looks like it was colored in, but it doesn't go all the way to her bra strap!

Are you sure this was the "final" version?

Trever1t · May 18, 2015

Parker219 said:
I REALLY like the first photo. The look she is giving is perfect. Almost like..."Are you going to join me"?

Too bad about the reflection on the glass doors, nothing you could do about that though.

The colors and contrast look spot on to me!

For the second photo...something weird is going on with her butt. It looks like its a different color and even texture? If I had to guess, I would say you had to fix some things in post production, and you lost some color / detail.

I'm not a big fan of the pose, just because she is in lingerie, and being in lingerie...what should she do? Read a book?

Since she has to be close to the background with that pose, the background items can be distracting, in my opinion anyway.

The biggest issue is her right arm....as you get close to her bra strap on her shoulder, her skin looks like it was colored in, but it doesn't go all the way to her bra strap!

Are you sure this was the "final" version?

thank you, there's overhead recessed incandescent lighting, could it be shadows you are noting and the lack of that color on her butt, having 2 color temperatures going on in the frame?

Parker219 · May 18, 2015

Zoom in on her right shoulder, about 1 inch away from her bra strap...you don't see anything weird? Maybe I need my eyes checked.

Can someone else describe it better than I am?

Trever1t · May 18, 2015

Parker219 said:
Zoom in on her right shoulder, about 1 inch away from her bra strap...you don't see anything weird? Maybe I need my eyes checked.

Can someone else describe it better than I am?

that is a shadow from the ambient lighting. It's on the raw file.

FITBMX · May 18, 2015

#2 is great! But I really like #1!!! She does look a little too processed for me in #1. But I thought the reflections of her in the glass doors was great, it gives you three different viewing angles, which is wonderful on a beautiful girl!