Need C&C ;)

[yoman]

i hardly use black and white while editing photos
well this is one of my attempts in black and white photo


My 1-year-old Niece 2 by wahablukman, on Flickr

and yes that is my niece's name on his cheek
Leave your feedback, will appreciate it

 

[jgooz]

black and white is fun. theres some areas that could have used a little fill light imo. pulled out a little farther for a wider crop, and get that kid to look at you. eyes eyes eyes!

 

[EPPhoto]

A tad underexposed, and the crop leaves out what's going on above his head.

Basically exactly what the poster above me said lol

 

[k d morris]

i hardly use black and white while editing photos
well this is one of my attempts in black and white photo

http://www.flickr.com/photos/wahablukman/5921582767/
My 1-year-old Niece 2 by wahablukman, on Flickr

and yes that is my niece's name on his cheek
Leave your feedback, will appreciate it

I really like this shot contrast and texture are ok. I always include the hands and both eyes when shooting children. I don't know your level of experience, so I am not here to judge your work - only encourage.
Q:
What were your settings and the light source?
Kdmorrisphotography.com

 

[yoman]

black and white is fun. theres some areas that could have used a little fill light imo. pulled out a little farther for a wider crop, and get that kid to look at you. eyes eyes eyes!

A tad underexposed, and the crop leaves out what's going on above his head.

Basically exactly what the poster above me said lol

Thanks for the critiques and comments ! i'll try to do better next time

I really like this shot contrast and texture are ok. I always include the hands and both eyes when shooting children. I don't know your level of experience, so I am not here to judge your work - only encourage.
Q:
What were your settings and the light source?
Kdmorrisphotography.com

thanks ! these were the settings that i used :
ISO : 200
Shutter speed : 1/200s
f/2.8

the light source was from my nikon D90's built-in flash, im not really happy with the result of built-in flash thats why i made this photo black and white haha