Nighttime park photos

[Xbethx]

I posted some photos from this location awhile back and was told that the composition wasn't great in them so here are a couple new shots that i hope turned out better.
Tell me what u think

Taken at 30sec exposure
f/16
ISO 100

 

[Mully]

The second image works better.....the curve in the road adds interest..... the first image has several flaws, no POV lens flare and overall too dark

 

[Xbethx]

Thanks for the feedback. I could do a tighter crop on the first one to get rid of that first lamp post and lens flare but other then that is there anything i could have done/could do to make it better