Nuevo aqui con fotos!

[Shamir]

ups! sorry about the topic! i didnt remember this one was an english forum!
Hey guys,! Sup ? well im Shamir,and im new here from the Dominican Republic!
Well the 26th i got my 1st Digital SLR, Canon EOS Digital Rebel XTi! and its been amazing, also with the 18-55, 75-300mm and a 50mm 1.8!

took some shots with the 75-300 in a poor village i was visiting!
Comments + criticism please

 

[MyaLover]

I love them, #2 is great, and they really tell a story. I like photos that put me there, and I can easily imagine what it would sound and feel to be there!

 

[spiffybeth]

i like the first one a lot, but it seems your focus was on the open door rather than the lady.

 

[Shamir]

THanks guys

Im still having problems on focusing with that 75-300 because of the image shake!.. but ill get the hang of it one day =)

Thanks again guys

 

[dab_20]

As MyaLover mentioned, with these photos I feel as if I was really there... that's something many photographers try to achieve, and is sometimes more important than the technical aspect of the photo.
With that said, thinking a bit more about your composition and point of focus could help a lot. Not bad though! Welcome to the forum!

 

[husky_mom]

hola!!... por lo menos yo si entendi el titulo jajajaja... yo soy de Mexico....

so to keep folk on track, I said that I DID understand his topic as I am from Mexico, so I speak spanish too... LOL

nice pics!! I also see the focus issue but overall it looks good to me...

and dab_20: do I know you?? ... how funny isn´t it...LOL

 

[Shamir]

Gracias Husky!! =)!

Thanks also Dab! yeah! i need to work more on focusing righT!

 

[Montana]

Most excellent subject and you capture it fairly well. Only slight complaints from me which echo what others have said....focusing issues and they way you frame your shots could use a wee bit moer preplanning. I know what you mean about camera shake with the longer lenses. I struggle with it myself. Get a tripod &/or a monopod to really help stabblize yourself.

I too own a Rebel XTi, and for the money, its a great camera. Sure is fun owning one!

Derrick

 

[platano]

Diablo tigueraso, welcome to the forum. I'm Dominican also, Havent been to our beautiful island in 3 years now... its killing me, but I will be there soon. Bienvenido a la pagina viejo.

 

[Senor Hound]

Hola and muy bueno! (That's all I know).

The second photo is my favorite. In the future, please keep a mental note not to cut the feet of the subject in the photo. Still, you captured the scene so well, I didn't find myself caring that much.

The third one is really good too. The intensity in his eyes is great, like he is a young Albert Pujols!!!

Bienvenido to The Photo Forum!

 

[Early]

Great shots! Keep them coming, per favor!

 

[Shamir]

Thanks Again Guys =)
Keeping tips in Mind =)

Dime a ve Platano! klk xD?

 

[jvgig]

The only other thing I can think of is the lady in 1 blends into the house and her light dress is all I see.