Old man shopping.

[Barry UK.]

 

[Barry UK.]

Any comms on this one please?

 

[jcdeboever]

You have a great eye. I think the image would be stronger if it had his feet in the there, showing a little ground, and the right tilt straightened out. It looks a little un-balanced in my noob opinion. If the feet and a little ground was in there, I would take a little off the top as well as I prefer an angle coming into the frame to be placed at the corner to keep the viewer inside the image, personal preference I suppose. Interesting image in that the man could be the father the guy in the poster. I think the crop possibilities would have a lot more to offer if the feet with a little ground and the whole bag showing. Just how I see it.

 

[The_Traveler]

Agreed ^
This is beautifully converted but to me it is sort of empty because I get no idea, no hint about him.
He might be old, he might not but I can't make anything out of it about him.
The light on the top is crucial to nail him in place but having the total sign in back of him would give some idea of a story.

 

[Barry UK.]

The shot was taken while walking around town, i seen the guy from the corner of my eye, he was originally using a magnifying glass to read what looked like a small note book, but by the time i had focussed on him the scene changed. I honestly had not noticed the picture in the background or even the light until you guys pointed it out, i suppose it was just a newbie lucky shot.