One from my homemade lightbox C&C

[512_SIR II]

I made a lightbox after seeing something on this site about it. I didn't have any lamps to use for lighting so I ending up using the big floresant light in my kitchen. I've only set up this one shot so far but I thought for under 5$ it came out pretty well.
Any thoughts? You can say it sucks if thats what you honestly think, it can only make me better.

 

[FranDaMan]

Your DOF is off, making the cigarettes out of focus.

But lightwise it looks pretty darn good. :thumbup:
I say building the light-box was successful

Happy shooting

 

[Derrel]

Yeah, the DOF could have been a bit deeper, but the lighting looks okay for a light tent shot.

 

[fokker]

Agree with previous two comments. The out of focus ends of the cigarettes really jumped out at me. Product shots like this, everything should be in sharp focus. It's also slightly annoying how the lines across the lid don't line up properly - this is easy enough to edit in PS though.

 

[512_SIR II]

Thanks for the input guys. I'll adjust the dof and make sure all the lines match up and try again. That line on the box really annoys me now that you mentioned it.