[FONT="]Ok... #4. Try to get a different angle then just straight on. Her eyes are closed. [/FONT]
[FONT="] #5. Capturing the water splashing is cool, but her eyes are closed, not a huge deal but when your capturing live sporting events you should take lots and lots of photos. [/FONT]
[FONT="]#6. Your looking down on her too high. [/FONT]
[FONT="]#7. He really doesn't like you taking his picture, wait for him to pass by or look for a different vantage point.[/FONT]
I'm sorry if I've offended you. If people just congratulate you, how can you learn from your mistakes ?
edit: damn font formatting issues.