One photo, opinions?

[timputtick]

What do you think?
I think it's awkwardly cropped and the pins are a bit out of focus, however the image quality may be fairly bad because I copied It from my webpage TIM PUTTICK PHOTOGRAPHY third image down If anybody wants to see It better quality.
Im interested to see what you would have done differently.
Thanks!

 

[thepaulreid]

I would be tempted to flip it upside down, the lighten the reflection and slightly darken the actual pins/ball. It would give the viewer something to think about.

 

[timputtick]

Something like this? sorry the quality is terrible it was the only way i could get them up, if they even are? I quite like the desaturated reflection. But definitely turning it upside down confuses the eye.

 

[thepaulreid]

Yeah, that makes me confused and defo looking closer. That 's an improvement in my book

 

[MidnightGrimm]

I agree. +1 on the upside down edit. I would brighten up the "upper" pins just a little, and vise versa on the "lower" pins. Otherwise, great work!!