ah, well congrats to you on your newborn

She is gorgeous!!
That first one in your second post.. a few things I noticed- the hand blocks a majority of her face.. and the whites are blown on the blanket. The good news is that since she's yours, you can reshoot and reshoot and reshoot!!
The second one is again with the strange angle.. looking up the nostrils is never very flattering. Do you have her on a beanbag? That can be used to get some really flattering angles. Or in a small basket, or anything large to show comparison of how small and sweet she is.
I look forward to seeing more of your work here!