I think this is pretty interesting, it seems to capture a mood. Getting that sky in the picture adds to it, and in this case I kind of like the power line connected to the house in the picture (often I think a line cutting thru can be a distraction but here it seems to work).
I think I'd like it better with less background, having lights off to the left in the distance and cars that you can't see real well off to the right is too much for one composition I think. I might pick which side of the background you want in the picture, might have been good to move around to adjust the vantage point and how it was framed. Or you could have just gotten the house and sky, lots of possibilities or more than one photo you could do here.
Pretty cool photo, great subject. I might think about making copies and doing some cropping and see how it looks done different ways.