I really like your subject but you didn't highlight the parts of it that had my interest. Would you be offended if I showed you an edit I did. It would demonstrate better what I found interesting in your shot.
Okay here's a little photoshop in action... I liked the horse but I was way more enthralled with the white & brown hair on the horse and the white bark and brown moss on the tree. I brought the colors out a little more and cropped it to emphasize what I liked.