Photo and Post Process Critique

[CanonSnob]

Any lighting tips that you think may make things better.

Also any editing techniques/tools/methods that should be utilized to improve my post work?

1 Original:

2 Original:

3 Original:

 

[That One Guy]

hmmm......well for me to actually offer any critique, i should walk in your shoes first. with that, loan me the girls and i'll see how i do at it

seriously though, i think PP of the shots look pretty good except for #3...is the orig actually the PP?

 

[AmericanJesus]

The post processed ones to me feel like the girls got more pale. but other then that i love em!

 

[Renair]

I agree with that one guy, #3 original looks better then pp