Portrait, let me know what you think

[Dark Anghell]

She was feeling shy and fat, so only got this shot that I liked.
Shot with flash bounced off a ceiling, here are the settings:
Exposure: 1/80"
F number: f3.5
ISO: 200
Focal length: 50mm
I had to adjust the levels and color a bit in Photoshop. Still can't figure out proper compensation for exposure when using a flash.

 

[Jaszek]

looks pretty good, I just dont like the black thing behind her. You can try cloning it out

 

[Dark Anghell]

looks pretty good, I just dont like the black thing behind her. You can try cloning it out

Ok I got rid of that pillow in the background.