Portraits

[goodguy]

Taken at the Toronto Pride Parade, feedback is appreciated

 

[goodguy]

Feedback anyone ?

 

[jaomul]

First one is catching a girl wiping her hair from her face unflattering and unaware. 2nd one is much more flattering but would in my opinion benefit from not being intruded by the person on the right of the frame and not having a bokeh person in the background.

I like some of your pride parade shots, these ones don't really do anything for me.

 

[mmaria]

she's pretty and I completely agree with jaomul

 

[FITBMX]

The #2 photo could have been good, if the person on the right would not have been there.
She is quite pretty!

 

[Derrel]

she's pretty and I completely agree with jaomul

And I completely agree with Maria, who completely agrees with jaomul. I think of these more as street candids, rather than portraits. I would try taking the second one and cropping out the bokeh person, and then cropping out the woman on the far right, and make a nice "tall" headshot out of frame #2.

 

[mmaria]

And I completely agree with Maria

quoted just to be able to read this two times in the thread

 

[chuasam]

She's really pretty but the photo does not tell me anything.

 

[goodguy]

Thank you al for feedback, found it useful and insightive

 

[that1guy]

these aren't the only two photos you took?

post more I'm sure you have some good ones.

IMO these aren't the greatest when it comes to composition :\

 

[binga63]

You should have moved your butt and spoke to the lady and shot some real portraits....candids not portrait

 

[goodguy]

these aren't the only two photos you took?

post more I'm sure you have some good ones.

IMO these aren't the greatest when it comes to composition :\

Check my Flickr, I have a whole lot of pictures I took in the parade