HDR seems to be a popular (and touchy) subject lately. I think it looks pretty cool, but I don't know much about HDR. (I just know what i think looks cool)
I will be interested to see what some of the forums HDR heavy hitters have to say if they weigh in on it. How many shots did you use and what program did you use
to compile them?
BTW, I personally find it a little ridiculous to point out problems with someones picture if you cant or wont make any useful suggestions on how to correct it. Just saying a photo "looks bad"
is not useful critique. commenting just for the sake of saying something negative without any intention of helping seems pointless.