Rusty Bikes

[Seekwence]

 

[KenC]

Works for me! I love this sort of thing. I like the background not being black in the upper right.

 

[photocist]

I would have rather seen you step to the left quite a bit, so that I got more detail and more of those bikes in the shot. At the moment, it seems that the board in the middle takes a LOT away from the shot. maybe use that as a backdrop, but at the moment it is almost the subject..

 

[Seekwence]

Thanks!

I should have provided a description in the first post...Here I was waiting for the bus in Beijing and saw a ton of bikes (surprise). I was really happy with the natural lighting and have a few more from this series, but this is my favorite!

 

[photocist]

Id like to see the other shots. I feel there is tons of potential with these. all you need is that correct angle (correct is kind of vague, i know...) but if you hit that right it will be dope.

 

[starcluster]

Yes! i think better try another composition and also it is over exposed at the left side.. but is a nice subject you have here :3
keep it up

 

[daarksun]

The composition is fine and the shot is super.

 

[Seekwence]

Thanks for all the comments everybody!

I would have rather seen you step to the left quite a bit, so that I got more detail and more of those bikes in the shot. At the moment, it seems that the board in the middle takes a LOT away from the shot. maybe use that as a backdrop, but at the moment it is almost the subject..

I totally agree with you, thanks for pointing that out. Unfortunately I can't go back to redo the shot, but it's good advice and something I will keep in mind.

Here are a few of the others: