San Jose Water Company

[tecboy]

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[Rick50]

1&6 but neither of great interest...

 

[tecboy]

1&6 but neither of great interest...

Can you explain it?

 

[Parker219]

If this were me...I would go back on a day where you had a better sky.

To me, it doesn't look appealing because our eyes would really never see a WHITE sky like that.

I am assuming it was a cloudy day, but I don't see clouds, I just see WHITE.

With a nice blue sky, I think everything would pop better, the palm trees, building, ect.

 

[Rick50]

1&6 but neither of great interest...

Can you explain it?

1st it's a plain building but mostly it's the flat lighting.

 

[otherprof93 34]

Was there a particular purpose for the first 5? I don't mean "I think they are worthless." I'm wondering if you were trying to document the building, rather than make an artistic image. I can't know if it works unless I know what it is supposed to do.

 

[tecboy]

Was there a particular purpose for the first 5? I don't mean "I think they are worthless." I'm wondering if you were trying to document the building, rather than make an artistic image. I can't know if it works unless I know what it is supposed to do.

This architecture has a little classical design. I'm trying to get better at photographing buildings, so someday I can be a real estate photographer.

 

[Bender]

Double post.

 

[Bender]

I said the same thing with one of your other similar posts - you are too far away.
By trying to include everything, you are making ti very difficult for the viewer to appreciate the details you are trying to share.

And as someone else said earlier - blown out skies and flat lighting do not help.

I also prefer to shoot architecture with something wider than 24mm on a crop sensor.
That will allow you to get closer and create drama with the perspective.

My 2 cents.

 

[tecboy]

What double posts? I can not get very close to the building. If I get too close, it is just close up and crop image, unless I stand in the middle of the street.

 

[Bender]

I double posted my reply so I deleted one.